Great story so far.

This is an amazing fanfiction. It's got a great plot, idea, characters, everything is pretty rockin about it. I hope you update soon. I think this has a lot of potential.

This is good! I would be happy to see a new chapter up!

keep going :D

I really like this fic

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

This is GOOD! ;D

Though I guess you've abandoned this story... last update was like in 2010... :(

/Jemsie

i really like this story! please update soon!

that's sad. But I like her. She's cool, but I'm worried about her chasing and killing humans. Still, it's good that you made her semi-normal. But even newborns hate the smell of werewolves.

This is really good! Thought out and well developed... I liked reading what you have so far and I hope there is more to come! Also, putting Alice and Jacob together was genius! Anyways, hopefully there is an update in the near future!

i luv it! i encourage you to write more plzz...and the idea of having alice date jacob is truly great!

you know i dont think it was a crappy end. i like it. i thought it was kind of cute really. :) lol did you get any sleep?... anyway just wanted to say i like the chapter and I cant wait to read the next chapter. i sense alittle crush in the air. or am I wrong. great job. more please.

Wonderful. Update soon I hope? x

You're doing a great job! I hope you continue soon!

I love how Jasper is the comic relief realy, its good to see him natural around vampires rather than all awkward with humans! And of course carlisle and emse would understand! They all suffered throught the smae!