It's a shame this story was discontinued :((

Well, I was just traveling through the archive and I found this delightful story! I read it and wondered... WHY HASN'T SHE UPDATED IN FOREVER?

Wake up and smell the neighbrhood hobo! (Hehe I got tired of roses) Start updating again! You are obviously NOT dead! You have like 47 reviews for only 6 chapters! UPDATE WOMAN! Or else I will just have to come and slap some sense into you!

Keep writing;)

~Your dearst friend,

randomzchicka

P.S. I know this review will probably back-fire on me later in our PMs.

I don't know if there are any relly nice lugage(I spelled that wrong didn't I? oh well) but you could have them covered in diomonds (again with the spelling) and they should be brand names, there's a lot of that. And hurry and update, I've got to see what happens. Please?

Omg! When is ur next chapter going to be published? I'm sooooooooo excited for it! Go Warriors, PJO, the Kane chronicles, and the 39 clues!

I love this story! Update soon please!

Ok I absolutely love this story and I think your a great writter! To be honest with I was hooked on the story as soon as I read the first chapter and I didn't think anything at all in the story was boring. I can't wait to read more!

ahahahahahahahahahahahaha!

it was actually funny :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Update!

Please update soon!

Great job so far.

Yes, I must say, this story is slightly boring so far. And yes, I've found Ian slightly OOC. However, at least you added some mysteriousness near the end.

Unfortunately, this is still a cliched piece of work, as far as I can tell. This is also riddled with errors, but you do have a good writing style. Although I did find the gap in time between this and the 5th chapter to be slightly strange. I was hoping for a better beginning.

I must say, A/N's in the middle of the text are highly annoying.

I don't know if there are any fancy suitcases... I guess if it was designer, like Louis Vuitton or Coach or something. I've seen some Juicy Couture overnight bags, but that might be too lowly for Natalie. :)

Ah! You are so IC! Love it! I'm putting you on alert now, because I really want to know what happens next. Ah.

I know this sounds totally newbish, but update soon. :)

"Paraphanalia" means, like, random knick-knacks, I think.

Again, I can't get over how IC you are! It's insane! I love it! There were a few mistakes in this one again, like you used "their" instead of "there." But that's just a typo, probably.

I liked this chapter! I am really enjoying how you show the characters. So many people make Dan too wild, (Me included) or Amy too stuttery, or the Holts too beefy. You keep them all perfectly in the middle. I do think you're a good writer. :)

Caillou! The bald kid! I know him!

Anyway.

I liked this chapter, especially how you portrayed Dan. There were a few mistakes, like I think you made a new sentence one time instead of tying two together with a colon. That's an easy mistake to make, though. So far, so good!