Well she does belongs on Earth. I mean she probably gets bored and it can't be comfortable to have to ask Jon for every single need of hers- to be so dependent. Hell, she'd probably be happier with ADRIAN, lol. That'd be funny you know? If she could go back but somehow with the condition that she had to be with him. Anyway, it was an excellent portrayal.

This is really, really good. :D I love your description, and your perspective on what it would be like if Laurie went with Jon. Pretty intense. I personally love JonxLaurie, because of how sad/bittersweet they can be, and you really touched on the sad part, so I'm quite pleased! Haha. Thanks for writing! :3

This actually quite nice-I like the description of things, it flows well together. I'm surprised this hasn't gotten reviews yet but here is one for you :D I really liked this, you did a wonderful job :) Bravo on writing this, really