So cute... I loved read it!

Awawwwwwww! Tony is the sweetest freaking guy in the world XD

Sweet. Just so so so sweet

That was so amazingly heartfelt and cute!

This killed me! But it was a wonderful way to go! It was heartbreaking yet I can't see Tony *not* doing something like this. Beautiful work.

AW! THis is the sweetest thing:):):):)

I'm torn between crying and laughing here. Crying because the whole thing is sweet and sentimental and all that stuff. Laughing because of the last line. xD I'm gonna go with laughing, because if you laugh hard enough you cry, right? ;)

Any who, although the whole letter writing thing is kinda weird (not in a bad way, lol), it's also really creative and really shows a more, hmmm, I don't know, /human/ side of Tony that you don’t always see, since he's always running around being a macho Iron Man in the movie. :P That's why I love your work, because you go in to the backgrounds of the characters and for people like myself who have only seen the movies, it's cool to be able to see them in different settings where they're not ALWAYS saving the world and doing pretty much nothing else.

As usual, you wrote this in a way that allows the readers to connect with the characters emotions and really experience the story. For that, I applaud you. The only thing that I found strange with this was that Pepper didn't question the whole "Mom" thing. She was just so chill about it, like, “Eh, whatever, kids, marriage, it’s all good.” xD Besides that, everything flowed together beautifully, as usual for you. ;)

And I love the title, by the way. :P

This. Is. (You guessed right if you didn't say Sparta!) Awesome. hehe... I guess Im just all bubbly inside, seeing how it ended. "Get your Mom to tell you all about the Stark Expo, thats a fun story." Loved it!

I liked it...

Hi!

This was really interesting and very original. I can totally picture this happening! Its awesome!

Please continue to write more stories!

Good luck!

Dreamcreator

Absolutely stunning. Well done.

Agreed with Pepper - Tony's letter was endearing. Your descriptions are really nice and engaging. Tony's letter, too, was in character, which I would think would be difficult to do. Nice work!

PS - so I randomly used pineapple in my story, I didn't know it was a common thread!