banned? -_-
any way anyone would have been smarter and not yelled the accusation so loudly..
wow nurse joy is a jerk

kooooooeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwllllllll

And there's a new plot twist added to the story.

just found your story today and read it all. Hope you update this story because i want to find out who 'bob' and 'kiz' is, so im adding this story to my favorites :)

I miss reading this...

will natalie be able to help murphy catch the girafarig

yipes

uh oh! natalie thinks the nurse joy in jubilife is the one who was there when she was expiremented on

I love your story can't wait intill the next chapter :3

Wow! I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

nice to see bob and kiz (spoiler unless you've read lsi) aka. james and kirralie and i like the fact there trying to not be noticed as the champions. i also found this story pretty good for now so im just gonna put this on alert

K, just got through catching up. I am looking forward to seeing this continued, still quite a few unanswered questions after all...

Keep going! :)

Good chapter! It will be interesting to see who these new people are. Also, thanks for the mention.

Oh god, I am an idiot, aren't I?

Anyway, I was the reviewer before me, but forgot I had already made an account yesterday.

Anyway, I would also like to complement you on the plot twist you introduced with 'Bob'...

Hilarious last chapter.

I haven't got much to say about this story, apart from the fact that Jessica seemed a little inconsistent. One moment, she was this slightly annoying girl, and then suddenly she hates Natalie. And I didn't really buy Natalie's reason for running away the first time. Sure, she accidentally transformed, but that was no reason to run off.

Apart from that, a fine read, and a story I'll be tracking. 8/10

Keep up the good work!