*yawn* what I read of this was dreadful
try taking a writing course

farkkkkk i cannot even comprehend how much of a bitch this woman is. there is not any words to describe how bad she is! i'd defs go with one of lilly's ideas!

really good story so far! i'm excited to read what happens next! :)

Doing great with how they talk very real 2 the show good chapter.

You killed Tina? LOL!

Yay! Happy ending! xP

I loved it. This is the first non-oneshot I ever read the whole way through. Sweet job.

Write more!

One thing: :)

Yey, everybody is happy :D

I enjoyed reading this story.

write a sequel

when i first read this i was kind of iffy but then i read on and i got addicted this was a great story

what you are done you have to write more please please please

that was such a good chapter thank you for making robby not drink the posin

that was good you should write more

omg that was a good chapter you have to write more and please dont let tina posine robby please so write more :)

haha that was funny you should really break up robby and tina and nice chapter

how about this for ch 31 that night in Robby ray drame his was stand at the chapt waite for tina his new wife he saw someone walk down town him Robby ray like up to the face of hie new wife but it wan't tina it was his frist dice wife susana and boy was she mad as a rock Robby ray said susana what are you doing here she said William Ray Stwaert don't you don't put our kids in that which arm she try to kill you and take all of your money and make the kids her servant

and I saw her buy rats poisoned for you all so you better make up uour mind and fast