Thank you for this! It seems I never tire of "academy" stories.

Nyota is forward as hell - but I'm loving it.

Sorrel has escaped? What? Shoddy Vulcan security?

Nice start!

I really liked your story, I would has said "yes" right away! LOL, Nicely, written.

This story was fabulous! I loved it!

Love this story!

This was a great story.

Marista,

I love your story The Visitors. It is now 2am and I just finished reading it. LOL You portrayal of the characters is excellent. I found a few minor spelling errors but that is it.

Good job! I am bookmarking this one as one of my favorites.

Lina

i liked this a lot! Spock & Nyota have such chemistry I love it.

I like this story. I enjoyed to read it. Two vulcan male for a human femele: great! I love Spock/Uhura and it's a wonderful story about them.

I really enjoyed this story. The relationship development between Spock and Nyota was well done. I loved how Spock slept with things that had her scent on them. Very sweet. I also really liked his Aunt as a character. It made a nice addition to the story to have her there to nudge things along. And it was funny that she called him Thumper.

Wow I absolutely loved this story! I'm also intrigued by Abigail :D she sounds like a great character. I'm really sad this story came to an end though D: it seems like it could have gone on, right into the movie and beyond lol, it'd be AWESOME if you did that! The thing with Sorell reminds me of something... like an episode of something or a movie or something like that... I've seen something similar I just can't place it...

Awesome job :D :D

Well done! :) Somehow I missed getting involved in this story when you first posted, but I just read the whole thing - couldn't stop clicking - and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I only wish Amanda had been there instead of Abby, but it wouldn't have been the same. I do think that Abby has the same mothering attitude towards Spock as Amanda does and obviously Amanda would adore Spock. Sarek was a cool dad here too; I like his brief scene. Spock's clulessness as to why Sorrell might envy him was mildly amusing but also telling. It seems impossible for him to comprehend the injustice Sorrell felt about the inequities of their lives even if its not logical. It might have been logical for the poorer student to have more time to spend on homework instead of the more advanced one, Spock. Great story. I enjoyed it a lot.

this was a totally awsome story. I must have 'aawwwd'like 5 kajillion times and when sorrell was being a jerk face and mind raping uhura I was like a cm away from my computer screen with my mouth open and I don't think I was blinking. And it's so CUTE! So I send you a cyber cookie *sending sending sending* I hope you enjoy it as much as I did your story.