It was good

Liked the ending :-D

liked ending bullys get a tast of their own medisen

haley could nave esaly not been arrested their is a amendment that states that a cop must tell you why your being arested befor they can do anything because they didnt haley in real life would instantly have been set free.

still a few sentance fluency errors and mixup of names

you keep forgeting to put retraver for Lu

Loved it

What does he have against Ian and Leah? He clearly isn't some kind of human serial killer.

You should be a writer. You wrote it likeit was a real cartoon it is too bad that The american dragon ended but this would be an awsome sequel.

Pity there wasn't more jake and rose. Oh well. Hopefully next season, right?

very true

Great Chapter man but what will happen to Jake and Rose?My opinion is that you start another story about are a really good writer and hate to see you not posting recently.

IWuzBacon

P.S:Will Jake appear again in Haley Long Season 2?Cause if he does it would be quite intresting...

Well, I thought it was a pretty good season finale! :D

It was certainly a nice fanfic too! Should be interesting to see what happens in the sequel...with Haley out of high school (Man I wish I was out of high school!) and Jake and Rose escaping again...

So overall, great fanfic! Sorry that I got a few chapters behind there towards the end...I've got problems. Lol.

Looking forward to hearing more from you in the future,

~ada

Great chapter!

I loved the dog's names...

~ada

I love the part where Leah's like "Yeeeeah. I'm gonna go home now..." Lol. I'm totally with her on that one...I would be gone so fast!

~ada

Wow! I wonder why this Zaid guy is so set on killing Leah and Ian...

Hmm...Maybe I should read more! Lol.

Great chapter! :D

~ada