Reviews for Deflower Me
Sketchy-d00d chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
o.o I don't... I don't... Evra! *runs into his arms crying* I just read something and I'm not even sure anymore... I SHOULDN'T READ THINGS LIKE THIS AT FOURTEEN! Especially while listening to a song by Nickelback called Animals. At 2am... On a church night... When I should be sleeping... *picks up a box of pebbles and dumps them on my head* Ablafglesjfbsan. -Cat.
Mystic Myra 8 chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Why did you do that to me?! I thought...I thought...WHY *insert face of horror*
Not COOL
Pain Girl chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
THAT WAS SO WRONG BUT SO FUCKIN AWSOME.

XxPain GirlxX
Molly chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
LOL. Despite the description, I kind of knew this wasn't anything dirty because of the fact it wasn't rated M. Plus, it said Larten/Darren, and the actual stuff is usually LartenxDarren. Anyways, this was kind of funny. Bye! _
Sometimes I lick windows chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
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THAT. WAS. SO. WIERD. YET. SO. AWSOME.

IT WAS SOOO CONFUSING BUT I LOVE IT!

I WILL NOT THROW PEBBLES AT YOU. I WILL ONLY GIVE YOU ALL THE CHOCOLATE IN THE WORLD FOR THIS AWSOMENESS WHICH SOME FOOLISHLY CALL A FANFIC.

GOOD LUCK.

~Rose Blaze- Lady of Fire~
Jaggedlightning has a Bazooka chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
i thought this was gonna b a freaking slash first i hate slash FF's there so stupid i kept reading anyway then at the end i was like ooooooooooo now i get it he just cut his hair cuz i thought he wasn't cutting his hair then i burst out laughing
Dragon Rhapsody chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
OMG I swear, that is the best.
xXsukiXx chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Awsome fic! I LUVED IT!
Emerald Ryuu Feather chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
YOU MONSTER! YOU KILLED HIS HAIRE!
LoveMe LoveYou chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Holy crap

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Oh, here I was think WTF and then I get how funny this is.
inkyreads chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
that was funny!

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The Y chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
So that was a mean joke Ireally fell for it. I can't wait to read others. But that was FUNNYo
Miraoi Leons chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
-throws pebbles at you-

DAMMIT. My smut. I could have rubbed this in my friend's face and been like ''Man, u r so stupid. Liek, yaoi is teh smex and it's everywhere. Rule 34 bitch. NO EXCEPTIONS."

Lulz, but nah. I liked the story, I love the way you write, especially in your later stories. . .

FO SRS.

Love the fact that you're asian, 4"11" , 14 years old, and write better than a shitload of people out there.

I'm Vietnamese/Chinese. 5"5" and 113 lbs I'm like, the fucking giant of the house. That's sad really.

...HEY WAIT, my mom is 4"11" too! :D

Basically, you are made of EPIC-NESS.
orangefangirl chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
! this really had me believing it was a smutty story~ xD me and my perverted mind :D nice story, even if it was a tease x)
Erian Erilar chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
That was SO mean... :P But it's great anyway XD Be very proud of this, you have the right to :)
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