Reviews for The Promise of a New Dawn
Zoe chapter 25 . 6/22
When are you going to update next, I was really captured by the story, so please update
wolfgirl232323 chapter 25 . 4/27
I love your book so much! When you have time, can you please update it? In so excited, I can't wait to read what happens next!
sanders1800 chapter 25 . 4/24
Love this story and wish it wasn't abandoned.
GalaxyKitten17 chapter 25 . 4/21
Hello? Are you alive? Every-writer-of-good-books seems to be just up and disappearing these days, other than the fact that I’m not sure your still living I really like this story. If not for the fact that it’s copyrighted and stuff I would ask you to publish it when finished! I love your detail in the story, it practically feels like I’m in Arda! Please update soon, I really wish to see at least some sort of ending!
Distortionist chapter 6 . 3/23
Just remembered he's still stark naked...
Natsuyuuki chapter 25 . 3/4
Hmm... Interesting. I wonder what Harry's role in the future... or Ellas?

Honestly, it's sound a bit... girly? why not Elias? More... manly(?)
RuneOfOld chapter 25 . 2/29
This was absolutely beautiful. Just wow. I hope you continue one day.
AmunRa02 chapter 24 . 2/27
Awwww man! Totally sucks you abandoned your story here! I was really looking forward to Glorfindal & Harry having a deep moment of understanding and connection. Really hope you one day come back and update this. It’s honestly a really great read.
Nydon chapter 25 . 2/21
I live this story! I like how you're showing his inner struggle. How you portray his slowly opening up to them but still showing his hesistency towards trusting them. Also of how attached he got to the ones who first found him and what it did to him to have them leave so soon, which was very realistic feeling. Please keep writing more!
Guest chapter 25 . 2/20
I really love this wonderful fanfic please continue it. Harry as an elfling is just to cute and the other characters are just so well written.
Nemhain2009 chapter 25 . 2/19
I’ve enjoyed reading your story! I like that Harry has been given a chance at a new life as a child so that he can heal. I enjoy Harry’s interactions with Estel, the twins, and Glorfindel.
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 25 . 2/5
Dang cliffhangers! I hope to read more soon. Please update.

I hope Harry/Ellas opens up more to the others about the past, alternate world, he comes from.
BlackFox987 chapter 25 . 2/3
Really like it. Is Eldar a higher race of elves or how is it connected to the story?
Obskurus chapter 25 . 12/24/2019
I will be honest. I came here becouse a translation of this story which I were reading isn't complited. But now I think that original is better. I love this story, it's so emotinal. I felt all Harry's feelings and I could imagine everything like I was there. It's amazing that you could make story so real and so emotional and still interesting, dynamic and little adventure. I hope you will continue writting this becouse it is amazing.
/sorry for all my mistakes but English isn't my native language. I hope it didn't freak you out/
Spidersauce chapter 16 . 12/17/2019
I can't read this further. I really like the premise of the story, and a lot of the writing. But Harry has to have had his head fucked with royally by the beings that brought him here, because his actions are entirely nonsensical. This is no longer Harry Potter. That may be who the story started out with, but this character is emphatically not Harry in any way. Maybe he has most of the memories, but they pretty much have to be heavily repressed. There's no way for him to have gone through what he did and then act like this without mental manipulation.
Just because he is in the body of a 5-8 year old doesn't mean he should have the childish naivete of a 5-8 year old. Being comforted by your teddy bear(sea shell) is not some genetic predispisition that is present in the body of a child. You don't trust the three dangerous looking men after growing up to 18 like Harry did. You don't complain about how people treat you, spend two days in solitude, then feel crushing despair and loneliness when you lose track of three dangerous people. You don't seek out the strange adults for comfort and hold their hands for reassurance. None of this is anything a biological child is somehow forced to do/feel.
That Harry recognizes he is acting fucked up and yet still does it and is okay with it is even more painful to read.
You have a lot of talent as a writer compared to most fanfic authors but I personally just can't make myself read this particular iteration of Harry. Everything is just wrong from one sentence to the next and it's extremely jarring and immersion breaking. It drags me out of the story and makes me try to process how any of this is supposed to be an 18year old Harry, and I can't find any way to justify it.
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