| Reviews for Caught Spying |
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Guest chapter 12 . 9/4 All girls for both |
Makuahine chapter 27 . 12/22/2019 Love the how this story has its twists and turns! Can’t wait for the next update! |
Guest chapter 27 . 3/29/2019 cliff hanger! |
Guest chapter 20 . 3/28/2019 Cursed Malfoy is an asshole in the story, no offense, but DAMN! |
Sakura Lisel chapter 4 . 3/28/2019 Hermiones crazy. She should abort the baby immediately and be donr with it. Not only was she raped and PURPOSELY impregnated against her will, Draco said it was ASSIGNED to him as some kind of 'task' by Voldemort. Depending on what snake face is plotting when he came up with this 'task', she should keep a rape baby that might be used for something nefarious by Voldemort after its born? Or that the Malfoys would 'let her' KEEP the baby after its born? |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/25/2017 This is amazing great job! |
Lahkesis chapter 26 . 6/7/2017 Well I am not sure wether I'm horrified or simply speechless about the way this story treats one of the most empowering female characters ever, she gets raped numerous times by Draco ,Pansy gets raped well at Blaise died not nearly painful enough but oh well can't have everything I suppose. It really doesn't matter that it's not really Draco who does these horrible things the blase attitude regarding probably one if not the most horrific crime one can do to a women is shocking. But the cherry on top is that after all the terrible things Draco did, even if he wasn't himself, you still see the option for romance. I simply find the story disturbing and lacking any sort of reasonable development or logic nevermind the spelling mistakes. |
Guest chapter 26 . 5/20/2017 CONTINUE PLEASE |
ella chapter 26 . 5/2/2017 This was awesome I can't believe that one imagination could think ig such an intimate story I loved it could not put it down and I have school in the morning |
Wynterlace chapter 26 . 4/7/2017 Cute story, continue writing |
Dramione-Fan 17 chapter 26 . 2/1/2017 loved the scene at the end between Draco and Hermione. please update again soon. |
Jojo15.01.1974 chapter 26 . 1/17/2017 Wow 10 kids. Good story too. Xx |
WolfLover1997 chapter 26 . 11/4/2016 You've got a good story going and I am looking forward to the next update. I wanted to let you know though that I've noticed 2 inconsistencies in this chapter and chap 25. In this chapter when Hermione is thinking of Draco staying at home with his mother and brother you wrote Leo instead of Orion. In chapter 25 you said that Dumbledore is the one that was tortured and killed but it doesn't make sense as you've already had Snape kill him . Hope you don't mind, I just thought you'd want to know as I would. Thanks and I can't wait for the next chapter |
Guest chapter 25 . 10/31/2016 Hi there! I've been enjoying your story, BUT I think you need to write down which baby belongs to who and the order they were born. Draco's brother is Orion and his last son is named Leo but you switched that. Also, dumbledore already died so he couldn't have informed them of Justin's death. Plus, Hermione and pansy gave birth before her mom and Narcissa, but now you changed it so their kids turned one first? I think a timeline would help smooth out your storyline. |
anja.quickert.9 chapter 26 . 10/31/2016 :-) |