absolutely fascinating!

This is good.

sooooo cute

Adorable! I love Aang and Zuko moments like this. Great story.

That was really depressing and really sweet at the same time. Yay!

aww so sweet

I love these little Zuko short-stories of yours ! they're so well written and in character, i hope you write more of them some time. :)

That was beautiful and had me tearing up!

This is so. Ridiculously. Sweet. I love Aang and Zuko's budding friendship, Zuko feeling guilty, mentions of Katara being terrifying . . . ahh, I just love it all. So beautiful. And well-written, which always makes me happy. Wonderful!

That was so sweet...:)

Adorbs. I love Zuko and Aang friendship. Zuko needs more hugs :)

This was really nice...

Katara's threat was definitely... serious-sounding, and I could understand why Zuko would lose sleep over it.

The neat trick that Zuko had was really nice, and I just absolutely adore Aang during this entire thing. :)

Great job!

Wow... You did an amazing job with this scene. I never really thought Katara's words would leave such an impact, but thinking about it now, they probably would.

That is a very cute scene at the end. It is quite likely that the first few days were rather rough. It is nice to see some exploration into that time.

This was brilliant. I loved how you explored Zuko's reaction to Katara's threat. I always wondered how he dealt with that. Such a cold line. You did a wonderful job portraying Aang as innocent but not clueless, which can be a really difficult balance to manage.

Very well done!

FQ