Oh wow! You mentioned vacation before the story evenbegan and I didnt connect the dots. So for me, a great twist. And ending there makes me wonder what Zim did hearing that lol
Meh, Zim is violent. Its not a stretch.

are you going to make more of this chapter i like it it's very good.

Oh Zim. :) So possessive. *rolls eyes but smiles* Anyway great fic. Humorous at the end.

Hee hee I love how possessive zim got over Dib! 3

wow...magnififcent, work...*applauds*

Zim did all that just to find out that Dib was just going on vacation! Haha!

Awwww! I think I almost died from cuteness. Damn, I hate lying to my friends...just today, I was telling one of my friends that I'm absolutely NOT OBSESSED WITH ZADR. I hate lying to them. :)

Well that was pretty good. I've never actually read a ZimXDib story before. I think you did that quite well, actually. It would make sense that, since Zim's an alien, he would think of that as 'marking his territory' and not anything more suggestive. ;P

You wrote the story pretty well, but try not to repeat the same word over and over in a sentence. You did that once or twice, most noticeably when Zim was scratching Dib's back, you said the word 'back' three times in the same sentence. You might also want to make the paragraphs smaller, or at least the last one.

Another thing is that you wrote Zim speaking in third-person and then in first. Settle for one or the other. I haven't watched Invader Zim in a while, so I don't remember if he does it all the time... but you should choose one and stick with it.

I liked this story, and I appreciated how you got the idea for it. I totally agree about following inspiration when it strikes - that's how I get most of my best ideas. Actually, the idea for Tragic Piggies (my DibXGaz fic) came to me while thinking of another fiction all together. Funny how stuff like that works, huh?

Wow, this review is long... Anyways. Great story.

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Wow..First time ever that ive felt bad for Dib, considering that Zim is my favorite character. :) Man, poor guy, those wounds are going to take a looonnngg time to heal :/ All in all, a great fic.

This was totally Awesome :D loved it!

LOL LOVE IT! 3 so... sexy... O_o...

Thanks for not making them pansies. Super possesive Zim is very believable, and Dib actually shoewed a little self worth and resistance.

The only thing is that I think you meant to say "let's not do anything to rash" instead of "rational" but if the only thing I have to pick on is wording you've done very well.

B: Just a little bit of OOc Dib at the very end, but I'm all for antenna love, so I'll let it pass.

i really, really liked this. :D it had me smiling the whole time! though it would have been easier to read if it was more spaced out.

interesting i hope you find you can continue on this story }

Violence seens normal for Zim, LOL I laughed at all the violence scenes..this was great, of course it's just for vacation XD

Great story faves I liked that purring scene too