Even though this had a happy ending, I felt really bad for them and what they had to go through. Such a traumatic experience! I think you did a really good job of keeping the characters true to themselves and it was also really interesting how you developed the mythology of the planet. Great job!

I love it! Its like a horror movie!but awesome and lots of detail!

that was a great story! i figured it would work out, thanks for the story

Story is growing very intense. A real page turner?... No no.. A real page clicker! Excellent * 10!

I liked this story ALOT! C'yenne (is that her name) got owned big time. Shows what arrogance gets you...

i was jokeing tower your storys are good i was just kidding ok

Lovely ending! I loved this story, and it is definitely going on my 'Read again' list!

My friend and I agree that this should be a second movie. I like it. All that needs to be done is add some other scenes and Voila, you got a second oscar winning movie.

this wasnt weird, this was romantic, and i loved how the seed showed the gift of life for neytiri and jake :)

damn

that was awesome!

i love how the bad guys die in defeat, its what they deserve

cool!

but what did she eat that made her vomit? or was that only because she had an upset stomach?

OMG this was an amazing chapter! The whole story was great!

Love it! All i can say really... Keep up the good work. Then i maybe give cookies

This is a really cool fanfic. I like it. Very imaginative and yet holds true to the original Avatar movie. The characters are all in sync with how they'd really act.

Keep up the good work and update:)

Love it. Very suspenseful. Keep it up, and update soon!