This is a really well written story! Your characters are original and very believable. The plot is new and original as well! I can't wait to read more! :D

You kind of jumped a bit, but it's okay. The appearance of the Flood deserves more detail, but all in all it's great.

A battle against the flood? This may be one fight they can't win!

This one is okay. Not as good as the others, but it continues the story nicely.

Oh boy. Scarab. Time to get creative.

As always, I like you action, and I'm very happy that Chapter 8 is finally up.

Just a little side note: the majority of the Unggoy are on the Separatist's side.

This chapter is relatively short, but I still like the way you do the action. Not to complex, but it creates a good mental image. Nice work.

Very good story, better than most. I liked how Taylor reacted with the Sangheilli, and how the action was done.

This is a good story, well written, but too short per chapter. The size of the prologue was fine but the actual chapters need some extension, other than that great job, great story, and I hope to read more soon.