not angry...just hungry. ;)

Great story. I’m sure you could take it farther. Love your other stories too btw.

love it hope theres more soon :)

Well done and fine ending. Thanks for writing.

This was a great story. I vote for a sequel

i read the whole story and loved it,when xena told ares that gabrielle was eve's father was pretty funny,i feel that maybe you need to add more chapters to the story, just a suggestion.

Very lovely. Humorous, and cute, and fluffy at times.

Greek fire instead of fireworks...lol. Love the little details like that.

I feel so bad for anyone who Gabrielle buys things from.

Hehe. Adored this chapter. I absolutely loved the Sappho poem, and I'm glad you took liberties with the story line, because I think it fits really well.

This is sehr gut! I love the "Gabby is the father." Ares' response was priceless, it was great you mentioned that. The little moment of role-playing was cute.

I meant to review the other chapters but they were so short... and before I even realized it, I was at Chapter 10. Anyway, I see something like this (not the settling down, but the realization of the feelings) happening sometime during season 2. It was a good read though! And I can't believe you would even think that the ending would leave anyone angry; now the way season 6 ended, that's great reason to be angry!

Gabrielle beat Xena to it lmao. You are an awesome writer. The while thing seemed so natural at each step.

Of all the things in the world that make xena's confidence falter it's talking to gabrielle about her feelings. I love the internal struggle.

deer in the way of a stampede.. I like how you adapt sayings.