Wow. This wasn't what I was expecting at all when I read the description. I don't really know what to say. I loved your characterization, especially little Takasugi.

Nopperabou-bo reminds me of slenderman -.- This story was freaking funny! Love the way Gintoki reads the same poem when he does something wrong :D

Aww, sad yet very good. I really like the detail too. Loved it :3

Okay I don't really review but...I read this before and I feel like reviewing it now so there :D

Anywayz..I ended up ignoring your warning and googled it. True, it did creep me out a bit.

BUT!

Good story :D love the quote too

please write some article about fuji and tezuka

thank you

唉真的很难看懂啊

ooooooohhhhhhhhhhh my goooooooooooooooooood !

from where did u get this brilliant idea ?

i love it love it love it love it !1

i really wish there is anyway to translate this to japanesse and send it to sorachi-sensie ! the story is just awesome !

i cried in the end -_- ohh god i wish it was longer -_-

Fuu Saki-san u really have a beautiful style that really can touch the reader's heart ! please please countine writing about the trio !

I loved your fic! - It isn't a way I ever thought of for Takasugi to lose his eye, which made it all the more intriuging. Looking back on the moment during the moment is always a fun writing 't it just like Gintoki to plagarize?

hey hey, nice story although u got the eye part wrong, cause in the teaser for the benizakura movie it's revealed that takasugi's left eye was shot, so that's how he lost it. but either way good story, but i think gum was better, but why did u make it seem so scary? cause in gum you make it seem as if they were fooling around. oh well

Loved it! I like to think they were such good friends before. Thanks for posting and please please please write more!

Again I found this story amazing.

I look forward to your next story!

I have your Profile page Bookmarked now.

Every work you publish seems to get to my heart and stay. Wether its happy, sad or crakish.

(Trust me I really can't think of a less lame way to say this)

Hey. This is really good

This is a really cute/sad fic and I'm sad that I didn't get to read it sooner.

I thought that it ended a bit abruptly, but I really enjoyed it. The set-up was really nice. The beginning was really cute, and I liked how Gin convinced Taka to go with him. And I actually felt kinda sad at the end (then had to eye roll at Gin's antics).

Do you think you would ever write a semi-angsty fic? I think that the end of this would work well for one.

Regardless, I hope to read more of your Jouishi fics in the future :P

I'm glad I could finally remember the faceless ghost name. And actually, Takasugi lost his eye on Joy- I mean Joui war (I watches it on youtube, 'The Birth of Shiroyasha') but I like your version better. Mainly because of Gin's poem. And, OMG! Did Takasugi just predict the future? How the hell could he know about the crossdressing? LoL