I can't stay

no Alvin please stay

yea but not to me

so just cuz it's his name it's funny

c'mon elle his name is ben dover how is dat not funny

alvie stop laughing at his name

elle don't say that 2 me

it is 4 da best alvie

oh alvie don't think like dat

I had to read my fav part of the story 3 more times when brookie said da-da :) love the story

i luv the story !XD it made think of something . i didn't say alvin n eleanor kiss who care i luv it. i hope u write other story i luv it

So from the sound of it, you deleted Alvin and Ellie's actual kiss. Pretty please record your story and post it as a video on Youtube. Be sure to include everything though (even the scenes you may have cut out of the version). I love extended versions. Fingers crossed.

kokopellifan1 (from Youtube)

Good chapter. Bitch is techinically (when applied to human females) just a rude word for a strong woman. So as not nice as it may be, if applied correctly, Ellie is a total bitch. Men are afraid of women who don't need them, and so they slap them with these titles. Women need to take control. Just imagine if women ruled all the major nations. We'd never have another war. Because women are better.

Oh and also, the unbutton the button on your pants thing, sounds like an invitation to masturbate. Do Alvin and Ellie have sex in the next chapter? I'm just saying. - KF1

Well I guess I should have seen the end coming, bit I didn't. Good work - KF1

Lol! The comment Ellie made about her breasts was funny.