Yeah, Im not sure how good something titled "Beetlejuice in Hawaii" would be. I agree, you should not make a sequel unless you have a REAL and COMPELLING story to follow up on. Otherwise your just wasting everyones time and ruining something good.

well i just found it so i'm kind of sad no sequel but i get it. As for Bettlejuice did u hear the sequel has been confirmed.

i always see martha with the doctor or now i see her and tom being with eleven like his rory and amy

I love this and I like the 10th doctor reaction.

lol, your story is amazing :D good wrk on ur story

I really like this story it was cute. But why did you do that with the ending, you completely ruined it :( horrible ending.
but i liked the story anyway!

This was beautiful. Thank you for writing this. I just felt that Martha didn't get enough attention or adventures with The Doctor

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Wow! This is awesome. Martha and 11 were in character, great job. I was hoping for a sequel but the one shot is really amazing. I'm a Ten/Martha shipper but I've always wondered about Martha with 11. After reading this, you really opened my mind to writing a Martha/11 fic. You're very talented and I would love to read more Doctor Who stories from you. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful fic :D

I'm sorry you didn't write the sequel. I adored the story! Seriously, I loved everything about it. It was very well done.

Oh, I love this oneshot. Amazing

Yes, you are mad. Haha

I loved the story line! I love your style! You've inspired me to write another Doctor Who FanFix now! Anyway... what I was trying to say is... GREAT STORY!;D

I might have enjoyed more, but this was fun too and slightly crack. Crack-fic is always fun.

haha i love it the ending made me laugh so hard

Oh dear god xD I think I'm in love with this story. You made me love Eleven/Martha way mroe than I ever thought I could...

Wonderful writing, you really captured the characters really well! Ahhhh can't wait to read more of your work!