Omg this story was amazing. So beautifully written. You made me cry...

Well this is one if the most depressing crap pieces I've ever read

Omg I'm balling so badly! You truly touched that soft spot deep inside.

That was so heart-breaking. It was achingly potent and I was in tears for the better portion of it. I hate to admit it, but I was full on sobbing at the end. Extremely well-written to elicit such a strong response so quickly. I don't think you should extend it though. Let it be what it is. Excellent piece, albeit deeply sorrowful.

Love it cant wait for your next update.

OMG this was absolutely Heartbreaking the writing itself and the story was Amazing the way you wrote their romance and love kinda reminded me of the epic love between jack and rose from the titanic i would Love to read it if you continued it but by making this a dream sequence between Bella and Jake because after this they Need a happily ever after especially if Jake and Bella felt all the emotions of the dream then the deserve a happy ending :)

oh my goodness, this is the sadest thing i've ever read, i was in tears...it's still good though

I broke into tears when i read the ending. they deserved a happy ending, i'm not mad, just a bit depressed, it fits into my situation in a way, my ex. he told me i either had to choose him or the love of my life, the love of my life IS my jacob in this and well its hard not to cry, i broke out in tears after finally reading it, i thank you for your writing skills and if you EVER need somebody to do any beta-things for you i will. :)

*tears streaming*

That was a beautiful yet very sad ending.

I like your writing!

You missed a few words here and there though.

Oh, my GOD, that was probably one of the saddest stories I've ever read! Like, ever-ever. Lately I've been on this major "Twilight"-fan-fiction-reading kick, and in the last few days, that little obsession has gotten me into a bit of trouble (i.e. staying up waaaay past my bedtime; crying my eyes out during particular parts of a story, or an entire story altogether; being unable to focus on little else than "Twilight"-related things, etc). But this was really good. I was kind of looking for an excuse to cry today, and I certainly found it in this story! Well done!

omg i love your story, it brougth me to endless tears. ur story story is beautiful

Your story was dark but beautiful at the same time. i have never cried or been so moved by a story like this. very well written. x

MY LORD that was the SADDEST thing I've ever read in my life! I'm still in tears, my heart kept braking over and over again even though this is such a short story! Do more with this please!

This is so bittesweet and sad. I'm crying so much! The way things turn out is just too sad. The way Sam explaind how things where happening and his emotions really got to me. At least they are together in death.

I think you should keep going! You are an awesome author. . Make Edward wake up and it be a dream. Make him realise that Bella was meant for Jacob. Then make him turn away from bella. Then I think you can come up with something. But I reckon that whatever you do, the story will be good (unless Edward gets Bella). Keep up the good work! I'll be waiting!