nice story didn't get the last line though

Oh my god, this was so ... good

so damn good!

God...

yay, someone finally acknowledged the fact that Link is afraid of heights! this was an interesting story, i enjoyed the flashbacks and the slight twist. (i'm a Zelink fan, so this was probably good for me)

That was Beautiful. Amazing. Brillant.

Aww thats so nice, a happy ending.
Hope Malon and Link get together, just what
I like! _O

WAH!

This was so beautiful! ::sniff:: Isn't it Jack?...

Epona: Uh...yay watever. Though I could care less about that flea bitten varmit...link. AND WRITE JACK NOT EPONA! IM A GUY!

Huh oh ya ::sniff::

Jack: But I did like the story it had a lot of depth to it. But like I said I don't really give a rat's ass about his FEELINGS.

Ah Jack don't lie...I saw u...with the stable...

Jack: oh no...u wouldn't say that in public.

Nah! Of course I wouldn't...I would send it in humiliatin' emails!

Jack: DAMN U!

Well TTfn!

That was beautiful! I loved the way you ended it...really tied the whole theme together. Don't worry-any bashing of Zelda that you did had to take place, and anyway, you were kinda bashing both Link and the princess when you did. But I really enjoyed this. _ I've enjoyed most of your stories, if I can remember correctly. I think it's been a year since I've visited your account, though, what with screwing up and all. Keep writing!

oh. my. GOD. I LOVE IT! THIS IS EXACTLY THE KIND OF STORY I LIKE! You should do something else like this...mabye with Mikau and Lulu or something?

Wow! That was really good! I enjoyed it tromendously. (Ack! Can't spell) It was, I can't think of a word to describe it. You're very good with writing emotions. Loved it!

Gah...need...tissue...! I loved it! So painful, and sad...but, so truthful; like you knew that that is what would happen...I say again- I LOVED IT. 'Scuse me, I gotta go cry now...

I like it. Bad BAd Zelda! I love this story, I love all Your stories. Another masterpiece!

*cheers* yeah, that was AWESOME! yay for malon and link. that was a great way to tell why link and zelda never ended up together.(of course neither did link and malon but i can dream .) great job, that was really good. Keep it up!

Ah, don't mind me-I'll just be putting this on my favorites. Yep, yep. _ Fantastic job.

I only had one problem with thi fic. It didn't have her view on things... this was all seen through the eyes of the scorned lover who found out the hard way. We never found out why she did it. Who exactly was David? Were they in love, or was he a fling? It leaves questions abotu the pain to be answered, but it's actually one of the best fics I've ever read. I guess I just love Angst.

Dark & Deep...very deep. One of few authors who took the romance from the bad side -Zelda screws and betrays Link-. As I read, I started to feel what Link feels...a few emotions but somewhat very strong. Pain and anger...confusion...and then ends in happiness, but in the same time...Zelda left a 'big hole in him' that'll take a lifetime to remove. Your writing inspires me indeed, for you have managed to grab my attention...feel the characters' emotions. Your style of writing clears everything up, without making me confused one bit. Your use of words are very good...you put a lot of things in right places (Like the song lyrics and flashbacks). You have a way to express through writing, your special way. Continue writing and read my fics in your free time. I got one similar to this one called 'A Hero's Curse'...