| Reviews for Just 'Cause You're Raising the Bet |
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   Queequegg chapter 1 . 7/7/2011 "what? Now? The time is now?" Hahaha I loved this! So fantastic! And I could really see Mary wanting to jump her new partner just because she's horny. Great little moments! Bravo! And thanks for sharing |
| Katie chapter 1 . 5/5/2011 This was amazing and sweet and hilarious and wonderfully perfect! You got the characterization down pat. Perfect. My favorite part is the 2nd part, it was just so cute and funny and THEM! I also loved the last part. This has to be the best line ever: "I'm wearing mismatched socks and plaid boxers," Marshall says. "There's no dress code to this, Mer." Happy sigh |
| ladybrin chapter 1 . 7/29/2010 teehee- i like the end of this- sounds just like our boy- can't wait to read another one- ITA- they need to commence with the ravishing- sigh |
| Tuva chapter 1 . 7/9/2010 Hot and in character. Delicious story! Well paced and well written. Thank you! |
| Serenity Marie chapter 1 . 7/6/2010 Wow, I really feel you got Mary and Marshell just right in this story and I couldn't help but squeal. |
| R J Lupin's Kat chapter 1 . 7/4/2010 In 5, Marshall has more willpower that I personally would have had with him, that's for sure. 1 - seriously; an empty house should be all the encouragement they need. This was adorable. Loved it - thank you! |
| sfchemist chapter 1 . 7/4/2010 These are excellent! I can so see the first one happening - it would explain exactly how they ended up as we see them on the show. And this line was perfection: "I'm wearing mismatched socks and plaid boxers," Marshall says. "There's no dress code to this, Mer." Thank you for sharing. |
| chinchilla30 chapter 1 . 6/27/2010 That. was. FANTASTIC! |
| SG1SJSGAEJ chapter 1 . 6/25/2010 LOVE IT! I really enjoyed the first one because I could see it as being a realistic backstory to the pie business as well as the drunk Mary with the handcuff cause that just sounds so like Mary. Also, love the last one cause it's M/M and really the way things should be. I think that you did an excellent job of capturing Mary and Marshall. Well done! |
| ThePoetsDreamed chapter 1 . 6/24/2010 Love it! |
| randomchibi23 chapter 1 . 6/23/2010 Lol. So random. So them. Love it! |
| Enfleurage chapter 1 . 6/23/2010 This is so perfect I want to wrap it up and keep it with my favorite chocolate and other little treasures. Mary is just so perfectly Mary! |
| b-mystique chapter 1 . 6/23/2010 cute love it to pieces :-) |
| BrittanyLS chapter 1 . 6/23/2010 Love these! The last one is my favorite! |
| Betherzz chapter 1 . 6/23/2010 really cute one! the 2 of them deserve to be happy, and i really dont think that either of them could be happy without the other one right next to them... thank you for the great read |
