I love this story about Garrus' past life, actualy the first stort i've seen about his life. Nice job! 3

This is literally the only story I found easily about Garrus's story about him and the recon scout. Great job with the story! I would suggest that Garrus writes a letter to Aeila telling her about what happened in his life and how she ended up as the good turian.

I've noticed you haven't been active in a while. Hope you check back on this cause I was gonna tell you that chapter five is missing and is just chapter four. I read the other chapters already and would love to fill in the gap.

Great story by the way. You really have a knack for this kind of stuff. But I'd like to see the missing chapter before I can give a full analysis.

Awesome story here, as I said at chapter 1. Now that it's over, I find the ending to be very ironic but true to itself. People often end up as the opposite of what they expect to be when they're young.

All I have to say is thank God Garrus was not The Good Turian.

*Claps excitedly*

My god, Bug, that was wonderful! You captured Garrus so well, and I loved how it was written. I feel so sad for him in the end, but I love how you have added to Garrus' history.

I will think of this story next time he mentions reach and flexibility :)

The sentence at the end, about his touching his unscarred mandible, ties up the whole story just right. Her 'mandible move' is one of my favourite parts and is a great metaphor for their time together. Reading it as part of the whole rather than as a separate part makes it all fit together.

Oh my, I could never write anything like this and by that mean both the quality of the writing and the naughty contents. But yeah, I can imagine turian tiebreakers could work kind of like this.

Whew. That was really good! Made me feel all... Warm and fuzzy. ::Snirk:: And not in a romantic way, either.

And that last line? Love it! lmao

This is great, to see this published at last. As I said, the dialogue is witty and sharp, her saying they would make a dangerous couple, if he were dangerous, is one of my favourites. The licking the mandible move was quite the way to win.

Anyway, you know what I think from the beta; this is to congratulate you on a job well-done! Have some wine.

Great story! Should have more reviews. Review, you lazy readers! ::Whip crack::

Can't wait for more. :)

Nice job with all the turian-specific details...can't wait to see what happens next! ;)

And something in every chapter so far made me laugh. "You're good at calibrations, aren't you?" LOL

Now that is what I call a foreplay! Realy intensive fight. I will try to find time to illustrate some part of the fight.