This was very well done. A joy to read. I don't know if 17 was supposed to be the end but it is a perfect ending for this story.

This is great! Please update soon!

And we are back to square one!

Amazing chapter the best so far I think the ending was beautiful about both of them just fitting together!

please write on! I'm dying to read on!

I could go for some more of this. Update someday soon, please!

Awesome, awesome story! Great writing, and all characters are in character. Your chapters are not too long or short, with just the right amount of detail. The relationship between Bulma and Vegeta seems to be just how it may have occurred; a couple of one-night stands. Most writers give them a long-time romance. I absolutely loved it! I hope you will continue this one, or write another. Thank you!

Hahaha! What a great chapter! Loved how Bulma really laid into Vegeta for the damage he caused. Excellent story so far. Hope there's more on the way!

This story is simply amazing! The plot and events are written so well. I even like the little Piccolo moments! I love the way you have Bulma and Vegeta interact and I can't wait to see what happens next!

this was very amusing and well written. I hope there's more soon.

Yey I'm glad I checked back on this story! I didn't think you were ever going to finish it but your still working on it whoo! Well I hope that you update soon. Can't wait!

Yeah you go Bulma! Lol can't wait for more :)

O poor Bulma :(

Truly entertaining! You have several climatic builds throughout this story that all lead to fruition. This is the first time I have read this so you must excuse the long review. I must admit, initially I was put off by the constant switching of perspectives. I began to question your flow between the swapping on character view points. Fortunately, the third chapter starting with a bang. The morning sequence is absolutely hilarious! Your perspective switching worked perfectly for here on, and I no longer doubted your ability. You perfectly capture Vegeta’s naughty taunting and manipulative behavior which I believe most fans feel core to his personality. By chapter four, you had me completely convinced of your story telling ability. The kitchen scene is one of the best “first time” renditions I have seen. The anger and lust motive is absolutely perfect, and this rationale fits seamlessly with the plausible flow of their relationship. I also love how you made Bulma strong in the post-“Vegeta-sex-glow” because she accepts that it was only sex and nothing more. The thin line between hatred and playfulness has been perfectly balanced in this story. The ‘Vegeta’s Confusion’ chapter demonstrated some great dilemmas within the Saiyan’s mind, but I was disappointed in the subsequent chapter. I especially like that you recognize that Vegeta has the ability to realize that love initiates a Super Saiyan (although he won’t admit it). Then, I was really excited about the party and the tension that it would bring. I was slightly let down by it not happening, but the tender scene that followed made up for it I suppose. I felt a little disconnect in this “comfort” scene because I didn’t see a solid foundation (one can appreciate a body without all these wonderful antics), but I still liked the idea of ‘riding the wave’ that Vegeta did here. And as you made obvious, he must indeed prove his worth. Please don’t take any of my criticism to strongly; I have thoroughly enjoyed your story thus far. I may be swayed by liking the dominate and sometimes violent Saiyan that lurks beneath the depths of the anime-universe Vegeta that we know as opposed to the alternative-universe Saiyan we can create.

That was AMAZING! I can so see Bulma doing that. I love how Vegeta is finally starting to realize just how bad ass Bulma is. lol. I can't wait for more. Especially more of a pregnant Bulma putting Vegeta in his place. :-)