LOVE

Loved this! So well done.

This was such a lovely fic! The first one I've read in quite a while, and it was a fantastic way to get my feet wet again. You deal so tactfully and perfectly with such a deeply emotional (and often exaggerated or dramatized) conflict in Ziva's life. It was funny at times, serious others, and always in character in a way that is honestly refreshing. I especially loved the line "uber-suggestive comments and groping- that's what his partners turned to in a crisis." It made me laugh. And the like "I am afraid I will always hear him screaming" was a knife in the gut. Thank you for writing such a wonderful fic. It perfectly encapsulates all of the things I love about the series and adds others that I wish the series had had (like dealing explicitly, when called for, with the serious conflicts at hand). It was a perfect balance of plot, conflict, angst, humor, romance... I loved it.

This story tore my insides to shreds as I read it. You didn't go that in depth about the description of the wounds, but you didn't have to; your character reactions were enough to portray the brutality of the situation. Bravo!

Terrific story. But I think it would have been better if Ziva got shot, and did it on herself. But that's just my opinion, but it was a really great story. You are a really good writer.

Very nice! I liked all the chapters. It was original and not cliche. Over all it was great! I do question your reference of pork in the sausage, as it is not kosher according to the Torah. It isn't a big deal, but picked up on it and was wondering. Good story, though. I loved the snuggling bit!

Fantastic story! I love that Ziva was protective of McGee and Tony :) So sweet. Great job on this!

Awesome job ! XP

Sorry just now seen that you put up the last chapter.. But I loved the ending it was great and the hole story was AWESOME! Great Job!

Awesome! what a beautiful story and perfectly in character. Wow! haha, as you can tell I have no words to describe how good this is. And I'm kinda glad I'm the 99 reviewer. It somehow seems better than 100; don't ya think?

well dang. didnt see any of this coming. i cant imagine the pain of having a wound catuerized without meds *shudders*

great story though (:

I really like this story !

You wrote a great Tiva. I loved the first chapter ... with Tony trying to be fun and Ziva taking care of everything

I like Ziva protecting her boys ... And Gibbs protecting his daughters ;)

And you last part was fun !

Congrats

-Cat :)

Mmm, just so you know, I think you could go amazing places with this. It's gorgeous and stunning and amazing and your imagery is soooo fantastic. I could see everything from beginning to end.

New NCIS writer? I think so. They should buy this from you...Or at least take a page from your book. Tiva doesn't have to be all cliche. I loved the way you wrote this.

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Dear Lost:

Just thought you should know that I burst out laughing when I got to the "Be caveman. Make fire" bit. Good work.

Sincerely,

Qoheleth

I just found this story and I loved it! I'm a hurt!Tony fan and a Tiva fan, so this story was perfect! Great job! :)