This was great! I love your way of writing and your use of words.

That was...I don't even know,because it was so,fucking,wonderful!

awwww so hot!

You could've expanded this, especially the sex scene. I dunno, it felt too rushed; the transitions were kinda jumpy and there wasn't enough dialogue :/

i totally would have prefered it this way as well why cant disney channel have all these ideas :)

An excellent rendition of the Breakup in Paris. However, I believe it could have had a little more... oompf. There was a lot more to be gotten from the concept. It was all a little abrupt, especially the final part.

The way you write is very pleasant to read though, and there were no writing errors to be seen. Which is why I'm a bit disappointed; it's obvious you're an excellent writer with an expansive vocabulary. I would have loved to have seen a bit more or it.

That said, I genuinely think it's a good fanfic. However, it could have been great. I'll be looking forward to your next fanfics.

Most sincerely,

SupremeSovereign

OMG this is awesome and totally the way it should have been! Srsly if U ever make a TV show can U tell me so I can watch? Utter genius can't wait for more!

i love it (:

THATS HOW I WANTED IT TO BE TOO! great work on this story! i LOVED it!

I do love the twincest twist to the episode.

That is exactly how it should have happened. Love it!

i was so sure sack was going to be the uke(bottom) and cody the semme(top)

i loved it, and the break up in paris ep. should have been like this!

:)

Another good story. Keep them coming! :)

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!

I WISH IT ENDED THAT WAY TOO!

Why can't it be cannon?

Stupid movie writing people not knowing when a AMAZING slash ending between two hot brothers slaps them in the face - dipshits, the lot of 'em.

I love this story more every time i read it _*

lol and i love how when Zack describes the "girl" he's in love with, he says amazingand *blonde* ja ne!~