Goddamn, you make her sound like the goddamn terminator!

... my opinions are mixed but i do believe this is a good portrayal

WHOAH. This. THIS. IS. AMAZING.

Wow! What a chapter, what a story! I had the same idea as all the other 'ignorant' individuals. Great way to turn her narrative on its head.

wow! thats metal

I agree. Air-bending can be very deadly ... just imagine the possibilities.

Wow, that was pretty intense. Short but sweet and you created some nice imagery with it. Yangchen does come across as perhaps a bit violent when she gives Aang some advice, but otherwise kind and graceful. There can certainly be a demon behind it though. I can imagine her being removed from the air nomads and encounters the real world, forced into a major cultural shock.

Nice one shot!

Airbending has always had some uniquely horrifying possibilities.

Woa. That was intense.

Mind blowing.

hmm, good story

Whoa. You rarely see stories about the previous Avatars. I love the way you described her and what she had to do.

Now, see, this is why it's a good thing Aang is a Technical Pacifist. He does more than enough damage as he is.

I am beyond words in amazement at the flexibility of your writing style. You've managed to capture a hard edged Harry with an excellent Luna to match. You captured sorrow in such perfection that I was moved to tears and the tragedy of being the first Avatar who finds herself little more than a shade of a memory. And now...

And now, you've managed to put into words the very irony of peace versus the war necessary to create it most times.

Congratulations. Not only is this story being added to my favorites list, but you are being added as a favorite author.

May your fingers never tire and your page never be blank.

Magi Silverwolf

THANK YOU!

Seriously, I thought I was alone in thinking that Yangchen was a creepy-as-all-hell woman.

During the trials of admission, where Avatars said 'Yeah, we all screw up' Yangchen was the only one who didn't admit to her deed.

Not only that, but there's no possible way that Peace can happen from the actions of a single person, unless everyone scared s-less.

*blink* Woah *mindblown*