Wiil you update? It is excellent

This story is great i just cant wait for an update on it

I'm loving this.

I miss this story so much! I hope that someday you can update it again because I'm dying to see what happens! D

I LOVE this story! The entire time I was reading this, I was on the edge of my seat! PLEASE update soon! I can't wait to see what happens!

Whoa, I can't believe I didn't come across this before! This story's great Sarah. I'm hooked right now! Seriously, I love your characterisation and the way you describe setting. You really dive into the character's emotions and thoughts too, which makes the story more powerful.

I love EgoShipping, as you probably know by now. I didn't realise this story would be an EgoShipping fic at first so I'm so glad I started reading it! And the AdvanceShipping? Well, I'm not a fan, but I can handle it in this story because you've taken a realistic approach towards it and mainly because the story's just so damn good! I'm on the edge of my seat!

I can't wait until your next update. I wonder how Ash is going to react when Misty tells him she's seeing Gary?

Great job so far!

Charityx

Oh, wow. I was on edge throughout this whole chapter, it's crazy, absolutely excellent. Much love. And Gary and Misty and Ash... Don't even get me started, heh

I'm not going nowhere until this story is good and done, and it's totally unlike anything else.

Thanks for the update

Yay an update!

Once again, your writing is fantastic. First person point of views are not always easy to write, but I think you do a great job of it here.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I am usually super pro-pokeshipping, but Gary is super sweet here! And is Ash jealous? Because I'd probs be into that in a big way. Anyways, as always I really enjoyed this chapter. This fic is intensely, and I'm always on the edge of my seat waiting to see what comes next. I can't wait to see how they're going to take action soon! They're all super heroic, so I'm sure they're gonna try to do something... Anyways, thanks for the great read :)

Great chapter. The plot development was really interesting and I'm quite excited for the next chapter. I love how you write Gary/Misty. And I am curious as to how the talk between Misty and Ash will go down.

'Trees swaying anominously'- beautiful 3 words that made me feel i was there.

Hugely enjoyable, you use your environment to the best of its potential- truely a star writer on this site x

PP8*

I am so, so, so happy that you are continuing with this story! I really love it. There's so much depth to the storyline, and the characters... they're so layered and complex. It's amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Yeeeeesssssssssssssss! You're backk! Soo happyy, to bad you were sickk,

The chapter was sooo cliffhanggyy it's killin mee! I hope you update Sooonn! Oh and I totallyy screamed when I saw you updated!

Health issues-100% understood. I've been dealing with that nonstop for seven years already, and I'm only 16.

ANYWAY Im glad thats better :)

Gosh, cliffhanger much? This is going to kill me, I hope you know that... This is such an amazing story, and very well written. No critiques at the moment. And I didn't comment on the last chap, but...

I love what you've done with Gary and Misty! Ever since the gunshot chapter; that's when I was hooked.

Looking forward to an update,

Missy :)

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Too much. I almost can't handle it. Haha.

(This is why I'm always so reluctant to read ongoing stories.)

Yay, you updated!

I can't remember if I said this in my other review, but I love how you write from Misty's point of view: I really think that you are able to accurately capture the essence of her character, which makes this whole story believable.

Keep up the good work!