Reviews for Once Upon a Vampire Pt1 & Pt 2
heralderofspringtime chapter 14 . 4/9
What was the point of Bella forgiving him in Ch7? Because in Ch 14 he has them have sex in front of Peter again, Peter touches her and Jasper, and then tells her she will be having sex in front of a multitude of people? She never should have forgiven him!
AliceCullen0629 chapter 24 . 12/27/2019
good story i liked it
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2019
When r u going to put the novel up I’m during to see how it ends
L-Anne Cullen chapter 24 . 5/26/2019
Wow so I read all of this just to find out you're not going to finish it? Very disappointing
TiffaniW chapter 23 . 2/16/2018
Damn, I wished you finished this.
amy.campbell.378199 chapter 21 . 1/1/2018
Interesting... Foreshadowing?
amy.campbell.378199 chapter 7 . 12/31/2017
Omg, great story :)
Loveforwolves143 chapter 24 . 6/22/2017
Love it!
angelaroberts202 chapter 9 . 4/15/2017
He keeps apologizing over the same things
Guest chapter 11 . 3/20/2017
Wow! Carlisle has a death wish!
Jess8023 chapter 4 . 2/27/2017
I thought u would have them have sex in front of the crowd if u had did that I would have stopped reading but it's good so far
PercyLover21 chapter 24 . 2/18/2017
Great story. I really love it. When are you going to put the novel up?
Englandofgale chapter 10 . 1/15/2017
I just noticed he calls her little dove is she supposed to be soap
ForrestersWitch chapter 24 . 12/17/2016
Se la Vie
IzzieRose16 chapter 8 . 7/12/2016
Bjorn
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