Reviews for Father's Day
IssyxIntroverted chapter 1 . 10/18/2018
This is exceptional. Absolutely perfect.
thetrueninjagofan12 chapter 1 . 1/19/2018
Holy frickinfrack that was adorable :3. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself I've read this 3 times and it's just as adorable as the first time
JEC00k chapter 1 . 3/7/2017
Touching little fic, and very cute there at the end. Nice job! :)
KiTtnSeNpAi chapter 1 . 12/29/2016
Amazing! I enjoyed reading this very much!
My God, I have no life...or friends...is this why I'm still single? 0-0 this is awkward...
Well, it was still a really great fic!

Now imma go party!
Wait, I forgot I have no friends...Imma go read more kyman and SP fanfictions, then xD God, I'm wasting my life but I love it.
Iamgaytrash911 chapter 1 . 5/29/2016
Aw cute
SouthParkObsessed chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Wow! I really like this! I feel so bad for Cartman! And Kyles so sweet :3
South Park's Only PKMN Master chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Not very good? It's amazing! I truly felt bad for cartman, and that's pretty hard to do XD Good job and keep it up!
LoveSouthParkXKyman4 chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
I love this soooo much! I love stories about the boys when their 9! I have to say this is one of the best stories ive ever read(: its was amazing! You made cartman emotional while still making him, well him. good job!(:
KymanLuver8D chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
I loved it! 8D
AbbyluvsKyman chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
this was beautiful! and idk y but for some reason it made me cry and idk y at all
Nom Supprime chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Aww this was cute!

I never ever see an angsty Cartman in any stories, and it's a nice change from his typical 'oh i'm so bad-ass' thing. Really, your story makes him more human.

I only have one critique: You said they were supposed to be nine, but then you mention them being in a high-school...? Well, I suppose it's a force of habit, seeing as nearly all SP stories take place in those years anyway.

So yeah, great story!
spotlock chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
AWWW! That was soo sweet! I really like this side of Cartman too, i just wish he was like that more on the tv show :D

BTW, i also like how you wrote this at their ACTUAL age, not seventeen or twenty-two. The fanfics are much better that way.

Write more stories, cuz this one was perfect and i want to see more! Great job! :)
California Gruesome chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Dwaw 3

That was damn CUTE. But i can understand your feeling of something being missing at the end, i felt like there was something missing to. The answer to that is: KYLE'S REACTION O.O

YES YES YES YES. Best one shot evar xD

Keep writing, pal
mpkio2 chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Another superb Kyman fic from one of my fav Kyman writers! :)

Damn! You did it again! I was thinking of writing an Angst Cartman no dad fic and Kyle comforting him, but it looks like you beat me to it! I'm actually gald you wrote it, cause I don't think it would be nearly as awesome as yours! It was the perfect blend of sadness and fluffiness to the end.

Bad? Psh, as if! As a review has already said, you are your own worst critic! This is tottaly awesome!

I'm glad to see you writing Kyman fics on here; don't ever stop! (Just a side question; where did you get the idea to write this fic?)

Please write more in the future! :)
EmoWithASpork chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Me:aw cute!

Hope:yeah it was pretty good

Damien:blah!

Hope:what?

Damien:Why the Hell wasn't I in this?

Hope:*rolls her eyes*you can't be in everything

Damien:I'm the ANTI-CHRIST!You should be bowing at my feet!

Hope:Whatever helps you sleep at night

Damien:...I hate you

Hope:no you don't,in fact right now you're undressing me with you're eyes

Damien:...shut up

Me:O-ok then um I added this to favs. sooo...yeah
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