PLEASE UPDATE IT AS FAST AS U CAN PLEASE AND MAKE MAY MORE FEISTY IF U KNOW WHAT I MEAN AND MAKE DREW GET ROMANTIC AROUND MAY PLEASE

I can't wait until the next chapter! Please PM me when you put it up.

yiu should update, pleasee!

I love this story and all of your stories can you please update this story!

Alright. So far not too bad at all. _

One thing. Capitalize! You lack capitalization in a lot of sentences. You seem to forget to capitalize the i in a sentence such as this one:

i didn't like pizza.

*It should be: I didn't like pizza. Makes it all neater and better for readers.

You need to capitalize in sentences like this (Note all the things I changed)

"Hey, i didn't talk to him first he talked to me,ok?" like i had no choice...

*Hey, I didn't talk to him first! He talked to me, ok?" Like I had no choice...

Alright? Then also, make the story a tad bit longer. I mean you are making a HUGE disclaimer (That by the way shouldn't be AS long, and I personnaly don't like those type of disclaimer, but that's my opinion.) The story can't be longer than 500 words. You should aim for at least 1,000 or so, seen how you lack few things to make each chapter captivating.

This is what I would do:

* Use a bit more description. Description that explains the mood of something, you know?

* Make it amusing for us. Plan each chapter carefully. Choose your topic, and make it funny tio captivate us. Each chapter must have its purpose.

* Use adjective to tell us the mood of a certain character. Don't just say said, say: said happily. And so on.

Well good luck on that story of yours :)

i doubt may would take it that badly and may liked drew later on no love at first sight

:):):):)

It was good

No...it was very good! :-)

I like it so far! Update really soon!

I like it it was Great! ;D

Pleas continue! :):):)

please update soon your story is nice though