This was great I was just surprised at the fact this was in the awakening! But, nonetheless I enjoyed it

Very cute!

YAY. :D

Very SWeet!1122!

Awesome story! I reread it like five times...

Interesting, didn't know about the Florence Nightingale Effect! That's really interesting...

I had to stop reading and put my iPod down a few times to collect myself, haha. Really, amazing work. Instant favorite, and I will probably re-read this several times.

Pointless fluff is some of the best kinds of fluff :)

Wow! I love it! It's hard to find good Kataang these days. Everytime I see a new story, it's Zutara,Zutara, and guess what? MORE ZUTARA! I hate it! Kataang rocks da cotton candy off the paper stick! Lol ;-D

Kataang fluff is just so cute. You just can't get the same effect with Zutara stories.

Aww- that was nice. The ending was just right.

this wass so cutteee i loved it there was noway you could make it better!x

Seriously, I had another "EW they're children!" and "aww! that's so cute!" moment... not very good for my sanity D: but anyway, it was still VERY interesting lol despite my initial gagging, sorry, feeling very conflicted here... much like The Boulder :D keep it up! Your writing it amazing! :D

That was breathtaking. What a wonderful, sweet, fluff-filled story.

Yeah, there's quite a few spelling errors, but I simply laughed at them and jumped right back into the moment. Normally, spelling errors irritate me so very much, but in this, I couldn't stop to feel anything but love and admiration.

That. Was. Adorable.

Oh my gosh this was sooo cute :D I loved it a lot. Both of them were in character and the plot made sense; it was all great. Good job :)

This was lovely! So perfect and gentle and sweet. Just the way I like these two. :) Thank you for the wonderful read!