Haha, poor Nathan! Simon played him good!

Oh dear god this was brilliant! I STILL don't understand how this couple didn't become cannon considering how Nathan always acted around "Barry" like a little boy pulling the ponytail of the girl he liked!

Wow I wasn't expecting it to be THAT hot. It was just...gosh it was...unf. That's all. ;)

F*CKING YES

I...this...I mean...*falls over* Yep, this is exactly how this made me feel: speechless. Incase you didn't know, you're really good at writing Simon/Nathan.

Seriously. REALLY good...

...Incase you are not aware, I freaking loved this and am now on my knees, begging for more!

Iiiiiiii... Think this needs a sequel. It's pretty great.

I liked the terms you framed this in, Nathan always plays, game or no, but this time he's beat. And it was really hot :)

you're right there arent enough of this pairing and this is certainly the best. very hot. I'd love a sequel or another part?

This is awesome. You've got both Simon and Nathan's characters down to a "T", I could practically see it playing out in my head. It'd be great if you could write some more of this pairing. Thanks for the great read!

I relaly enjoyed that, love this pairing. Really IC and hot;)

(If you don't mind me pointing out, there were a few American words that slipped through, like "garbage" and "pedophile", but other than that it was seriously one of the best fics I've read from this fandom.)

I really, really liked this -this winner!Simon and a Nathan that refuses to surrender, this twisted game they have here. Great job.

That was amazing...and they were both in character!

Well done! :D

Marry me. Like, now, because this was fucking beautiful!

Lol at the Barry thing~ Gosh this was amazing and totally hot ;) kudos to you, and I hope for more!

That was amazing! There should be more fics for these two.