I love Michael Jackson and i this story

Great story I love Clois and I also hppen to be a bigMichael jackson fan

Okay, THAT was just absolutely precious! I love it. The trip down memory lane was sweet. The cuddling was hot. But the last scene? The last scene was hilarious! Great job.

i thought it was going to be their wedding day, not their kids gradution from hight sbhool. good to know even in the furenter ther can still push one others bottons

good story

This is great !

Hey!

That was such a cute story. Loved the ending. D

I love MJ and his music, M.I.P. (Moonwalk in peace)!

It's always fun seeing these two look back on their history together. The memories are also a reminder to me the reader. Them reminiscing and making out is bit overdone though... which is why I'm glad the ending was included.

The end was a bit of an icky yet funny twist. As soon as you said big day I thought you were talking about getting married and Clark and Lois acting that way made me think they were pretty young. That's what makes their actions soo funny.

Good job! Write more!