I actually ship chris and excella! 3 so this was amazing story :) thumbs up

All I can say it WOW! I think you did a great job with this pairing. I know this pairing isn't the most popular, but heck even I like unusual pairings from time to time. The sexual tension between them is explosive, haha. Just how I imagined it would be if they got together. You've written the animalistic lust so well. I like Excella, she's an awesome female villain. You made it work. I hope you'll write more.

Dude... you're my hero!

WOW, that was amazing writing. I mean you got some skill there. You didn't ramble, you got everything down so well that I could seriously imagine this happening in the game!

It amazed me how you got them into character SO well :)

Anyway this story was a good one, even though it wasn't about the romance (mostly about the lust) it was a different take on things.

Almost like the rivalry in Mr. and Mrs. Smith.

Though I didn't (still don't) thoroughly enjoy lemons, I have to praise your writing style and description. It sucked me in right away and got be believing this could really happen. Amazing work :D

Wow...I was really, REALLY hesitant to read this, but I was sucked in by the title and great summary! Now I'm glad I did, this was fantastic. :) Even though I'm not a fan of the pairing really, this was very tasteful, and extremely in character, which made it believable and interesting. ;D Your writing is fantastic, I hope to read more from you!