| Reviews for Butterflies in my Stomach |
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ZaryaM-pinkskullsandmoonbeams chapter 1 . 4/7/2019 So great! I don't think I've seen other people shipping this, but it works. |
Chitose chapter 3 . 6/25/2015 Yuri... |
Mansion chapter 3 . 10/28/2012 well i read the story i found out it very nice as you gave such romantic beginning for cat and tori. My critique is that you don't really have much characters involved like you got trina and andre but you forgot a lot of the other characters. Another things is that you kind change the personalities of the character shows very drastically now that is not a bad thing but that just my opinion. Lastly you should continue towards the ending like the get friends or family involved and see how they react and give more situation. |
Yuri-hime chapter 3 . 10/9/2012 They seem a bit awkward in the last 2 chaps, which makes the fluff a bit awkward, but meh it was still a decent read :3 |
Yuri-hime chapter 1 . 10/8/2012 Lol, love how it ended with Tori and Trina XD And I absolutely love/adore Cade, but I am intrigued by Cori. So, I shall read on 3 |
DovdGraaf chapter 3 . 7/5/2012 This was adorable, really. Awkward but adorable. |
DovdGraaf chapter 1 . 7/5/2012 Looks cute so far. I like the way you write. |
MrTVM chapter 1 . 3/11/2012 I was actually looking for a story with just this pairing and luckily stumbled across the community with stories for just that topic and your story was there. Great start I must say. You really captured the silly/playful/hopeful side of Cat without going over the top with it the way I suspected might happen. The "good in math" bit was a nice addition to the character development of Cat. I feel you also portrayed Tori as close to she is on the actual series as she seems to be a bit neurotic about virtually everything. So this characterization worked nearly flawlessly. Seriously, can't wait to see how it all plays out in the short three chapters. Nice job! |
Jeremy Shane chapter 3 . 9/23/2011 Good Story |
lynettecullen chapter 3 . 9/13/2011 I'm glad that they decided to not keep it a secret. |
lynettecullen chapter 2 . 9/13/2011 I LOVE how that turned out! |
lynettecullen chapter 1 . 9/13/2011 Yeah, this is great. |
loganX5 chapter 3 . 11/23/2010 Cute story. I especially liked the witty dialogue in chapter 2. Keep up the good work! |
xWannabe-Novelistx chapter 3 . 8/18/2010 Please continue or make a sequel about their relationship! I would be eternally grateful cause can see a great story from it! Pleasssse! :) |
alltimelow777 chapter 3 . 7/16/2010 Hmm. I totally forgot to review this, so hear goes! Awesome. I dislike Cori immensely, but this Cori fic is one I'll read more than once. (I have already :3) Also, I think TheSlap has it out for ya! With making Cat's real name Catarina and now saying she's allergic to nuts, it seems they messed with two of your stories! Lol. |