Reviews for The Undefine
SassyChip chapter 1 . 4/13/2018
Omg I just love your story gawd I think it might be discontinued and I’m literally dying. I’ve always been trying to find a fic like that and if u do update it’s gonna be amazing pls continue. And just a funny tip so Gaara’s dad is the Kazekage which means similar to Hokage it’s just a name so if u actually took the word Kaze and made it his name it would just translate to wind, cause that’s legit what the word means so it was funny to see his dad addressing himself as Kaze lol but I love ur story
Rosekitten12 chapter 14 . 3/9/2018
Lol laughted so hard at the ice cream part that fat guy got what he deserved
Rosekitten12 chapter 14 . 3/9/2018
The fork part was so funny and then neji was all like don't touch gaara's food lol
Rosekitten12 chapter 13 . 3/9/2018
Love how you made someone like gaara and doesn't like neji in most of the fanfics I read the girls like neji and doesn't like gaara
Rosekitten12 chapter 12 . 3/9/2018
Love how gaara and shukue had a fight te mental fight was really
Risekitten12 chapter 11 . 3/9/2018
Evil demon spawn nazi of hades lol sick neji is so funny to think that the cool collected neji could act like that love your work
Rosekitten12 chapter 7 . 3/9/2018
Love your stories you are amazing keep up the good work
Crimson flower chapter 14 . 4/6/2017
Uncle huh? I wonder if its Yashamaru. I don't know considering the fact that Sasori is his cousin and Deidara is Sasori's fiancé. But still it sounds really interesting. And about the Shikamaru pairing, I'd prefer if he was the Uke as well as Kankurō. Love the Sasodei. Really just...fits?
Stop-The-Pain chapter 1 . 2/24/2017
This was one good read i was sad to see it stop being updated but now that you have im re-reading again and it is still just as good as i remember. Keep up the good work :)
Guest chapter 14 . 2/4/2017
Just writing to say that I'm really enjoying reading this and it's an awesome story! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Guest chapter 14 . 1/25/2017
Update soon please
Sa-Ga-Ne chapter 14 . 4/11/2016
First off, in my opinion gaara doesn't look like a panda. He looks more like a raccoon with a tinge of cat-ness. Secondly, I don't see why people put SasuNaru in their stories... I mean ew... Those two together just don't go together if you ask me... So i skipped all that. I know that's the "classic couple" and stuff but blegh it's just weird in my opinion
SparkyIceblaze135 chapter 6 . 12/28/2015
Awwww Sasukexnaruto Narsu IS REAL
SparkyIceblaze135 chapter 5 . 12/28/2015
Aawwww IT WAS ABOUT FREAKING TIME They admitted it
SparkyIceblaze135 chapter 4 . 12/28/2015
Lol spying on Sakuke Lol
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