What happens next

I love where you're taking this story. The depth and development is awesome. I read all 3 chaps. and I think this story rocks.

LOVE IT! Continue please!

This is actually the only teen titans story I have read so far and it's awesome

Sounding great, can't wait to see how it keeps going.

Although, if you ARE re-introducing the Beast, Beast vs. Cinderblock might be interesting...

I love the Chpater update sson please

Great chapter! I love this story so far, keep it up! :D

I like where this is going. Please update soon!

I liked the idea for the sotry, but may I suggest less monologuing and more show-not-tell?

i feel like you can improve a lot by showing the story through character action and words, convos, things like that...too much internal monologue makes it disjointed.

the concept for the story is very good! keep it up!

This is a great story so far! I've always liked fics concerning the beast. Maybe it's because I just loved that episode so much. Anyway... awesome start and keep writing!

-Sky :D

not bad so far. I'd love to see what happens next though before I make any decisions.

I don't usually leave reviews, but I wanted to let you know: this is one of the few stories here on FF.n that I'm actually excited about. I can't wait for your next update!

The characters are in character, and I really liked the last lines of the point-of-views.

Thanks for a great read!

CONTINUE! I love BB/Beast and Raven/Demon stories (odviously.) This is awesome :)