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kwityerbeliaken chapter 1 . 6/7/2011 Haha, it was very good! I like it :] Keep on writin' |
Djap chapter 11 . 7/11/2010 I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! Right at the start, when you wroto about the names I kept thinking: Wouldn't it be great for them to get twins? A boy and a girl so they didn't have to decide for one name!And you actually did! How cool is that? I can't believe it! Thank you very much for the story. Oh, and they actually had their wedding after all. I kept wondering about that too, with them being parents and all and loving each other... Oh and I really love the grand-parenting sessions. You did a mighty fina job there and I'm really proud to know you and being called best friend by you. Thank you very much and keep on writing! You're getting better every chapter - besides I am ver sure that you can write the dance szene! |
Djap chapter 10 . 7/11/2010 Oh my, I can really see poor sparkles as pinguin... but please don't tell him so. I really don't want to hurt his feeliungs - and get eventually punished bfor doing so by his dwarven lover |
Djap chapter 9 . 7/11/2010 Oh no! That poor, poor sandsack ;) |
Djap chapter 8 . 7/11/2010 I'm totally with the counseler there... they just wouldn't be themselves anymore when they would stop their ridiculous arguments... |
Djap chapter 7 . 7/11/2010 okay, i totally love that month too (And I actually did it before I actually read it). Great smex scene - you're getting better and better at them (although I still like the one in your DAxA story most. I like snarky Acey) |
Djap chapter 6 . 7/11/2010 YELLING-COMPLAINING-FOR-NO-REASON-PAIN-IN-THE-ARSCH-DWARF Okay, I seriously love them arguing like that. they are really cute. thanks for writing this. It's just cool |
Djap chapter 5 . 7/11/2010 Uhm... I actually love sinach... and i did eat snails once... they ARE kind of tasty with the right kind of butter, you know... |
Djap chapter 4 . 7/11/2010 I forgot to metion that I'm really interested how they made the room for the baby look like. Oh, and that was one quick smex scene. i really hope there will be more to be read soon? As or this chater: well. Poor Sick Sparkles! |
Djap chapter 3 . 7/11/2010 Hi there, I finally came back a few hours ago and started in on your story as soon as I could. It's really great! thank you for writing it and I feel really flattered for it being dedicated to me. THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! So, what about the story, hm... I really loved the discussion about going to the counselor, and I'm really curious if they'll really go there. I absolutely love the decision about the names of the baby, and I really love Sparkles food cravings. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, so let's see what you wrote... |
Djap chapter 2 . 7/3/2010 Tehe - to quote you my friend. That's just another really great chapter of yours. I read it a few days ago, but I didn't have the time yet to leave any longer comment, so I'm doing that now. I can really imagine them bickering even while still so intimately connected. You write them really good and they stay well in character. I was really really touched when finally Gimli did tell Sparkles that he was in love with him. Yay for all couragious dwarves on this planet! Oh, poor poor Sparkles got sick right away. I wonder how long he'll have to carry the child? And I totally loved the situation, when their family was wondering how the child would look like. I think the child will have many fun with all of those family members. And I'm on the side ith the healer: they probably need some counceling before the child is born - I'm really curious how this all will turn out. Thanks for writing this and I hope you'll soon update the story. I'm curious if it will be a little boy or firl and how it will look like. Those two bickering about the ight name seems also a very funny prospect for the future chapters. Thanks for sharing Until later my dear friend Djap P.S. The next two weeks I'm not sleeping at home and won't have access to the internet. So don't wonder if something bad happened to me or something. Everythings fine, I just don't have access to the ethernet. I'll go house and dog - watching for a friend and on the weekend I'll make a Trip to Aken. I hope you are doing good. Do you still have holidays or starts the school soon? |
Djap chapter 1 . 6/21/2010 THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! That was really really nice from you. I was sick the last few days and this morning I finally got to check my messages and what do I see? Thank your very much for writing this for me. I really appreciate that! And such a long one too. And without knowing, you just exactly hit my mood, as the last film I saw was about a gay man and a straight man being friends until the one falls for the other. Sleeping with each other nearly destroys their friendship, but afterwards they do get along with each other again and stay friends. that was a real good idea, so your characters wouldn't be OOC. Really very well done! I just love babbling sparkles and his interactions with his parents. As a thank you I'll post somethig for you I wrote a while ago. it should have been a part of the holiday series we talked about before, but I never got around to actually finish the story, so you'll get just that part from me. THANK YOUTHANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU |