That wad a great read. Very touching.

Yaaaaay. That was very fun to read.

Awesome story! Well written and easy to dive into and get mentally involved in! 3 Thanks for writing and uploading it!

This is a wonderful idea, there should be more chapters! I like the way you write Yahiko!

I loved the modern spin you put on Yahiko meeting Karou and Kenshin. I only wish there were more.

I really enjoyed this. It was an interesting premise that still fit right into the original story, and you pulled it off really well. Plus, Yahiko's voice is right on, and you rapped it up very neatly at the end. Great job! :D

What a refreshing story. You got the essence of the characters and managed a realistic change to a modern day setting. It's nice to get a Yahiko-centric Kenshingumi story for a change. I really enjoyed and found it well written.

nice story, well rounded, and exactly what I was in the mood for.

I have no idea what about, but another peace set in the same universe would be nice

Stubbs

i loved this little one-shot. the characterization was perfect. i liked finding a fic from yahiko's point of view. you hardly find POV'S done from any of the minor characters done well.

This was a really good one shot. I really enjoyed it and totaly think you should write more to it.