Reviews for Swap
Your Dark Figure chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Did I just see a reference to South Park in here or is it just me XD
kdmdzgbnn chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Hey, Mello swap his body because of the storm? Like in the Misfits serie? .
mistical yuki chapter 4 . 6/5/2011
Mello is such an a** but I realy like his cocky attitude ~smiles~
Fairylust chapter 4 . 1/1/2011
Not meaning to add to his HUGE ego, but he is the best, well he's ONE of the best, cause I thnik that L is the BESTEST!

Great story!

Luv the ending!
crispybutts chapter 3 . 7/28/2010
by the way, this is awesome :D
Miss Bright chapter 4 . 7/22/2010
HAHAHA, your Gevanni is HILARIOUS. lol, well this was an epic story. *adds to faves*

The epilogue was really nice. Really angsty/fluffy. Which is a good thing, in my book!
loochester chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
YESSSS THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
jis chapter 4 . 7/20/2010
great story i really enjoyed it

thats the first story i read with a bodyswitch of mello and hal

...and it was goooood xD
razzi chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
oh. my. gosh. this first chapter is AMAZING XD

a hal and Mello switch is definitely not something i have seen before. but i am loving it XD

only thing is, Hal reffered to Near as a "12-year-old"? cause by the time Mello has his scar in Death Note, Near is at least 16ish. lol.

and mello is taller than Hal by that point too xD

this is still teriffic though :D imma keep reading n.n
ITILY chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
OMG! SUPER HAWT!...Smexy as hell, burning!...I love this, it's kinda funny and I like Near being all submissive..

But I have to say the best part was definitely the epilogue, I like how you brought Matt in...You've really describe Mello in a new way, accentuating on the more controlling side of him, I adore it when he says how he can manipulate people, that's usually for Near...

Anyway, I really enjoyed this, thanks for finishing it happy with Mello and Matt alive..Ok, I'm happy now, and I have class in 20 minutes, bye bye...
yvonna chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
congrats on the story, i really liked it. oh by the wat is this a really long oneshot or a story...and dont feel dirty alot of people have wrote worse i should know, i read them...anyway thinks for the story bye!
Royal Puppet Master chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
I enjoyed this. It moved a little fast but it still made sense if you ask me. Don't ask me though cause I don't make sense. Le sigh... Man... Now what am I going to do with my life. I guess I'll update on my two stories. I'm mutitasking. I'm terrible at multitasking but it's all good. Allot of people do it and I just can't. Ah... Oh well. I'm going to go practise Kaori Yuki's eye style. Thank you for keeping me entertained. I loved this by the way.
SakuraAddiction13 chapter 3 . 7/19/2010
Its a good story! Just PLEASEEEE Update the next chappie! I need to read chapter 4 :P

-nikki3
xNear chapter 2 . 7/19/2010
-GASSPPP- ...RAI IF YOU UPDATE SOON I SHALL UPDATE TWO CHAPTERS OF MY FANFICTION IN RETURN. I. LOVE THE THIRD CHAPTER. -mutters under breath- But that cliffhanger..was cruel..e n e

YOU.

HAVE.

TO.

UPDATE.

; ; mycrackishsanitydependsonit

3 iloveyouforthis D
patterns-at-dusk chapter 3 . 7/18/2010
...you've just convinced me that mello is a physcopath...

but great story
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