Little stark reminds me of harry potter.

Wonderful story. Heartbreaking and beautiful and sweet.

aww, so sad and so cute and awww.
Good story.

Awww that was really gorgeous.

~Thomas~

Thanks for this one-shot. :D I love Jack x Nathan stories - too bad there's not that many of them.

Very sweet and loving. I loved the conflict and liked the way you resolved. I particularly loved the way Jack tried to hide at home and how Nathan threatened to rewire S.A.R.A.H. if he wasn't let inside, snicker. Thank you for sharing.

Hi,

I love all your stories, and this one in particular.

I noticed, however, that you occasionally have some minor grammatical problems and so I was wondering if you have your stories "beta-ed?"

If not, I'd be more than happy to volunteer!

-Brainless