very good i loved it.

I feel cheated.

I was promised a Slayers/Lost Universe crossover. What I got was pure Slayers with an epic level Mary Sue mixed in and Lost Universe nowhere in sight.

I hate Mary Sues.

I won't read further.

I'm seriously considering the idea of quitting this story. I get the feeling that no one is reading anymore.

I love the exchange between Wizer and Lina. Keep up the good work.

Slayers and Lost Universe were two of the first animes I ever watched. They're still two of my favorites.

You've certainly done your homework. Good work so far. Looking forward to reading more.