Is Ranma a diary holder?

Great story by the way. )

Where are the updates? I love this fic!

so awesome can't wait for more. does ryoga have a diary? it would be funny if he had the normal boy diary. or maybe that's ukyo.

Keep it up. Like the intensity and I think I have an idea of who those couple people are. Can't wait.

"Just let me strangle him for ten seconds! Just ten seconds!"

Don't we all feel like this toward our brothers sometimes? Nabiki's just getting a head start! You know I was waiting for Ranma to arrive. I'm enjoying the way Akane and Ranma's interactions play off of one another, it has a natural, playful feel to it.

I'd like to thank everybody that's reviewed so far, particularly You ROCK Harder. If anybody is interested in discussing the story, please feel free to contact me. I can always use more sounding boards! I'm currently not exactly at the peak of health, but I'm struggling on with the next chapter anyway. Hopefully it'll be up within the next two weeks or so.

I am anxious to see how Ranma works into this, he's usually so lighthearted and cocky that he may have a tough time sharing the spotlight - or flat-out stepping out of it - with Akane. Hopefully he'll help to lighten things a bit, can't wait to see!

Interesting to see how the written diary messes with the owner if altered, which makes me wonder how much another player can mess with a rival with just a pen. The fight scene had a good flow to it, which can sometimes be difficult if the author gets carried away with their words, so bravo!

So, if Schroedinger's Cat had HAD a future diary, do you think it would have gotten into that box? Of course it probably only had a [Warm-Lap-&-Furniture-to-Scratch Diary], not a [Get-Yourself-up-out-of-that-Lab Diary].

Ha! Nice Chapter!

Well you KNEW I'd be here! Nice way to bring in Shampoo as a diary holder, what will Ranma do when he finally realizes what's going on, I wonder? Knowing him, Akane's diary should prove very useful. I was also glad you lightened it up a bit with the NOT killing each other (poor, poor Yuno!)aspect, that would be a toughie to swallow with the Ranma cast.

Akane's shaping-up nicely, it's pretty smart of her to try learning Ranma's techniques before he does.

I agree with our good pal O'Donoghue, sometimes the 4th person goes on a little long and takes away from the story. I say this with clenched teeth, though, because I love those rants! They crack me up!

I don't get the review situation, maybe because of the lack of Ranma, of because it's a crossover...I couldn't tell ya. But honestly, every author here want's more reviews! Just feel good looking at the stats and knowing someone's still reading, it's all we can do!

I had to review now...all I can say is The Medusa's Gaze. I laughed so hard and fits perfectly with Akane's personality. Keep up the great work.

Interesting conceptually but 4th wall narration breaks the flow of storytelling. Looking forward to where you take it.

Interesting...I't didn't dawn on me till 1/2 way through that the other diary holders would change too. (How I could miss this, who knows!) With this realization, the ante is raised!

Interesting idea. Akane could use the knowledge to change her first meeting with Ranma - for example avoiding the bathroom incident. She could also disable the water heater for one day - that would give her time to start her relationship with Ranma without the influence of Soun and Genma.

This was very well written. I don't think I saw any mistakes in it, and I find the concept very intriguing. I do hope you continue with it. There are so many things you can do with this plot, and I'm anxious to see how you spin it. I really liked how you started it prior to the beginning of the canon story too. Not many people do that for some reason with alternate universe re-writes. Good setup. I'm anxious to see how things turn out when the other characters start showing up. Please keep writing!

-C

I haven't actually read anything here for a while, then I just happened to see this title and thought, "I like Mirai Nikki, could be interesting, why not!" Can I say...awesome!

I don't CARE that I can't imagine Akane ever saying the words "Piss off!" to anyone, your writing style is so enjoyably witty that you could have all the character personalities replaced with Spongebob characters and I would still love it! The whole part where Akane tried to slip through her first day unnoticed, I laughed out loud no less than 5 times! I AM looking forward to seeing what you do with Ranma, but I think I'll love whatever you throw out there next.

I send to you my blessing that you may have many reviews!