tifa hissing at saying to her boyfriend and husband cloud it s about time you fuck my pussy with your penis again it's been a while the last time was that night under the highwind

Holy shit this is great ! And much appreciated by this fandom

Holy tonberries. This is the best Fic of these two I've ever read! :D

They were so in character, the setting was spot on. Grammar was superb. And the best of all for me? They had Closure! They were giving each other the chance they so long to have! What I would give for Cloud and Tifa finally making things canon. Huhuhu Nevertheless, Your fic? It puts my heart at ease at least.

So much passion. In what little time you did, there was character development. And I love it. The pacing was also what made it great. There was no rush. None at all. Again, your usage of words made me feel like I'm watching it instead of reading it. Kudos to you!

I rarely give reviews. After reading this, making me giddy and all, I just HAVE to type one down. ;) Why this doesn't havw more reviews, I'll never know.

I hope you write more of CloTi thank you for sharing with us such a wonderful story.

This might be old but definitely gold! Hoping against hope you'll one day return to FF.

What a well-written piece. Enjoyed reading this. Thanks for writing this!

Very, very well done. Completely in character and I'm so glad they finally got off those dratted steps. The only thing I would have changed...is that ring tone. ;)

So good :))

loved it. i like it when cloud isn't pictured too broken to function. seriously ppl. he's human. he must have wants n needs too.

Been meaning to put a note here, but had a devil of a time finding the story again. I love it! That shyness you sense in Cloud is just addicting. And to see he break out with just passion... Rowr!

Grrat work, I really enjoyed this!

Very well written, great job! I don't think I've read of their relationship being portrayed in that way and you did a fantastic job. That Tifa had waited that long and Cloud was finally willing to give, though she was surprised at how much made for quite the read.

That was so well written, and you kept the characters amazingly in character. I am writing an FF VII fic too with Cloud and Tifa and though it's set in an AU, this is a great example to show them in character.

Considering I just finished watching Advent Children before I read this, I can honestly attest that you wrote the two amazingly in character.

So well done, I absolutely adore the story! So sweet and the ending is adorable. Fabulous job! :)

I don't usually read this kind of stuff, but in all honesty this was beautiful. A very downgrading word, forgive me, but since reading my mind is now mush so I can't think properly. You kept them very-well in character, and I am envious of the way you described it all so perfectly without using vulgar language and other things.

Your grammar was insanely good, which is a rich delight of fresh air from other authors who use modern words and nicknames for such things as lemons. Maybe that's what I like most about it.

They seemed very much in character and in love; of course, that's my opinion, but I bet many others would agree. :)

Overall, it was well-written and gorgeous, a weird, sexual sort of way. Like I said, I don't read much lemons, but when I do a appreciate the way authors occasionally keep it clean. I am looking forward to reason more of your work.;)

~ SoonerMagic

One word: Awesome. Love the details and their characters which is kept in place as it should be. Thanks for the fic!

I love how you kept the two in character. Perfection! And boy I would love me some Cloud lovin' ;)

I love how you kept the two in character. Perfection! And boy I would love me some Cloud lovin' ;)