I always imagined that the picture was sent to Edard and he drew a mustache on it :3

Wasn't Al going to Xing at this point to learn Alkehestry? Heh, I can only imagine his hand to hand will get better there too.

Can you write one about Ed and Al's relationship?

Olivier is damn awesome, and there aren't enough fics with her in it.(Let alone about her).

When I first saw the chapter title, I didn't know that the dogs and puppies in the photo were Hayate's family. I remember looking at the pic the first time, and I thought it was Den's, not Hayate's. Thanks for clearing that up, and it was a sweet ending you put for the pups.

so cute! I loved ch. 1 and I liked the way you incorporated the Elric family to the circus picture. I like the names you gave to the kids, but in my opinion, I think the names would be suited as their middle names.

wow...this must be the only chapter you've made so far, that has made me kinda depressed. LOVE IT!

Aww. Papa Hoho... *Dabs eyes*

Saw Dobby die for a third time today, too... *Sulks*

This was so incredibly good it brought tears to my eyes. What a truly fantastic story.

Aw it's over? Well it had a pretty nice ending, and this chapter was also very well done. I hope to see more from you soon!

wish i had the same determination as havoc

AWWWWWW! Ed finally admitted that evil creepy Father was more of a bastard than Hohopapa! I'm so proud of him! Good job chica!

*claps and cries* POOR EDO MISSES HOHO!DX

So cute and sad *wipes away tears*

Wow! This is great! Can't wait for more.