please continue this loved it I want to see what's going to happen next

I liked it

noo so sad..i disliked it so much when he died, yeah i know didn't get to play him long though...very nice fic!

Asdf, this was brilliant!

I love Allen/Makarov now, I don't know why, lol.

I love how you portray Allen! He's one of my new favs along with Roach (who is my #1 fav right now). But still, this was hot and sexy! And the ending was honestly believeable. Makarov, you heartles SOB! -grumbles-

ANYWAY! I hope to see even more Allen/Makarov fics from you! Oh, and Roach fics as well, since I know you write those too. :D :D :D

Oh, I loved it .