So cute!

awww...so cute...i love it.

SORA! Firstly, never doubt your work. Never. I know it's hypocritical because I do it, but if you must, do it at the end... especially when it's actually SO GOOD. This was great. I love the idea of Draco lusting after Harry, and I'm a total sucker for when a guy spills his true feelings. I also like the way you did used the flashbacks. You're a good writer Sora, have more confidence! The tiny problem I see is the grammar, there were a couple of little mistakes, but it didn't take away from the piece. Great job, you took one of the hardest couples and wrote them with grace.

(Sorry this is so long, lol)

-Aly xo

Well, there were some spelling and grammar errors which could probably have been spotted by a read through but meh, they didn't distract too much. There were some missing/wrong words in parts and Pansy's last name is Parkinson btw. All that aside, I liked how you stayed true to the characters, esp. Hagrid. I must admit there was a bit of cheese, but it wasn't as terrible as you'd think. :) twas quite lovely to read. The fic I mean haha.

ooohh, i love this ! *O*

Congrats ! : D