Wish you’d have finished

I really enjoyed this one! Thank you for sharing.

Man, it seems I always find the good fics years after the author has ceased posting. I've truly enjoyed every bit of this story, and if you ever feel inspired to finish it up then I would love to read the conclusion. Thank you for sharing.

Beautiful chapter, I'm really enjoyed reading it!

Shame is wasn't finished... Is this fix no longer active?

Continúa por favor

I love this ending, too. What happened to super-sneaky Alice? :D (Awkward...)

I'm a little iffy on the the changes to their abilities. I don't get how edward is blocked from everything but visions and Aro was able to see everything I assume. Crying is somewhat okay... Aro should have displayed more enthusiasm for Bella's potential. But the writing is good just some of the concepts need a bit more fleshing out. Still worth reading more.

hey continua este fic

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Ok I definitely sense some tension from Jasper and Edward, of the sexual kind. I love the twist and curve turner you threw into this story! Please continue this story - its so awesome it'll be a shame to just give up on all you're hard work!

Hahahaha! I loved this ending as well ! lol

So they're a hypocrite? So does ed and jaz have something? Please continue this, I really look forward to reading more of this, and hopefully finding out what's up with Alice, and maybe seeing Bella be turned. :)

So glad I found this. Update soon please

Is Alice turning human or is she experience human like stuff through Bella?