| Reviews for The Elevator |
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Eveythingicecream chapter 2 . 11/27/2018 I'm sorry this was a boring read. I can't t finish this. Also you need to get right to the point with explaining scenarios. You say the same things different ways. |
Smooth Pancakes chapter 5 . 11/4/2018 I don't know if it was always planned to end this story like that after the fifth chapter, but I hope you and Azure129 collaborate again here in the future and consider doing another chapter or two to this story! I would love to see what happens when Arnold and Helga are rescued. Do they wake up or will they still be asleep when the elevator is fixed, resulting in Gerald and Phoebe seeing them sleeping together while holding hands in the elevator. I want to see Gerald's reaction SO BAD! And then not only after they're saved, but also maybe a chapter about the dance that next evening. As it is now, the story ending after chapter 5 still feels like a natural enough conclusion, since they're obviously about to get rescued and get out of the elevator, but I wouldn't be in the slightest bit opposed to another chapter or two in the future to wrap up the story with the school dance and wrap up their weekend together. Either way, this is a great story, and by two of my favorite writers in yourself and Azure129! This was, if I'm remembering correctly, my sixth or seventh time reading this story since the beginning of September. I have a feeling that number will probably reach double digits by New Year's, lol. |
amoramistad29 chapter 5 . 11/1/2017 Queee no pudiste dejarlo asÃ! Esta buena la historia la trama absolutamente todo y no lo. Continuaste ? Espero te hayas enterado de The Jungle Movie en noviembre 2017 y pues decidas continuarlo aun tengo esperanza de leerte el final de esta historia |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/11/2017 Cheating is such a disgrace, but even if you get cheated on,trying to hurt the other person or cheating because they cheated never works out in the is a way to work it out. |
itzelsarai0903 chapter 5 . 4/3/2017 OMGOSH! I've just finished and it's perfect. I think we need more AxH moments after April Fool's Day and before TJM I really enjoyed everything! The end is so good. THKNS :) |
llazo4108824 chapter 5 . 5/1/2016 This is some cool fanfic that you made so could you make the rest of the chapters of this fanfic pretty pleases soon. And I will like it if Arnold and Helga be together in the fanfic at the end. |
Marion the Geek chapter 5 . 10/15/2015 More please... |
Butterfree chapter 3 . 2/16/2015 Oh my gosh, Arnold's Grandma...why? XD |
heyarnoldfangirl chapter 5 . 1/31/2015 The ending was HILARIOUS! very cute story... |
serendipityrain711 chapter 5 . 3/12/2014 Awww very sweet story...i loved how helga and arnold held hands before they drifted off to sleep.. sigh i cant get enough romance between this perfect couple..they are meant to be! :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2014 Hurry I want to know what happens |
heyarnoldforeverandever chapter 5 . 2/19/2014 YAY! I finished it! This was a great story. (: |
heyarnoldforeverandever chapter 4 . 2/19/2014 This story is SO cute! I love it! (: |
heyarnoldforeverandever chapter 3 . 2/15/2014 YAY! HE ASKED HER TO THE DANCE! I love Arnold. He is so sweet! One question...DID HE EVEN HAVE TO ASK HER?! LOL! (: |
heyarnoldforeverandever chapter 2 . 2/14/2014 THANK YOU! I had NO idea what those wood things that broke from Helga's feet were, i mean in the Hey Arnold! movie. I had always wondered what she tripped on. Thanks for clearing that up for me. Anyway good story. (: |